高考英語高級改寫示例
在日常的學(xué)習(xí)中，大家都沒少背知識點(diǎn)吧？知識點(diǎn)就是一些常考的內(nèi)容，或者考試經(jīng)常出題的地方。哪些才是我們真正需要的知識點(diǎn)呢？下面是小編整理的高考英語高級改寫示例，供大家參考借鑒，希望可以幫助到有需要的朋友。
高考英語高級改寫示例1
◆ 巧妙的改寫
(1)Only 改成no one but
Only Tom passed the exam last week. → No one but Tom passed the exam.
(2)as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/The moment
No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.
(3)have sb/sth do/done
The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg was broken.).
(4)變換插入語的位置
�、� However, they suggest fees should be charged low. →
They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. (NMET 2002)
�、� I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. →
This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. (2004 全國卷Ⅰ)
(5) 用同位語代替非限制性定語從句
Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→
Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days. (2002上海卷)
Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.(2008年湖南卷)
◆ 倒裝句
�、� The library is to the east of the teaching building. →
East of the teaching building is the library.
�、� Although we are tired, we are happy.→
Tired as we are, we are happy.
③ Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. (2002 上海卷)
�、� May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!(2007年湖南卷)
◆ 被動語態(tài)
�、� Opinions are divided on the question. (NMET 2002)
② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. (2004全國卷 Ⅳ)
�、� New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江蘇卷)
高考英語高級改寫示例2
(一)主題句原則
一個好的主題句是文章成功的一半。不僅文章有主題，段落有綱，句也必有中心。文章失卻主題，就會不知所云;落無綱，則一盤散沙，句缺中心，就無意義。所以，在立足于篇章時(shí)，一定要首先明確文的主題;在發(fā)展段落時(shí)，也要首先寫好主題句。從PETS三的`特點(diǎn)來考慮，主題句最好是置于文首或段首，這樣讓人一目了然! 以下就是兩個實(shí)用的開門見山式發(fā)展主題句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word).
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word) into serious consideration.
(二) 句式變化原則
好的文章動靜結(jié)合、張弛有度有節(jié)奏感。句式也是一樣，要有變化性，這不僅能使文章更生動，也是語言表達(dá)方式的需要和表達(dá)能力的體現(xiàn)。句式的變化，主要是要注意兩點(diǎn)：
● 不要從頭至尾使用一種句型。
● 長短句結(jié)合。
由于語言功底的欠缺和慣用思維，很多人寫的文章一種句式到頭，如：
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
這樣的文章雖然意思表達(dá)出來了，卻顯得呆板，欠生動。解決的辦法是：
1.間或使用主從復(fù)句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因)
比較：He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比較：The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比較：Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亞)
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申)
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比較：You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒裝句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比較：After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比較：He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比較：No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比較：Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
當(dāng)然，句子并不是越長越好，也不是越復(fù)雜水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多長句的堆砌讓人覺得是買弄。有時(shí)侯，一個短小精辟的句子可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。特別是在文末段尾。比如：
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
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